Tuesday, September 30, 2003

ADOLPHO THE THIRD: Installment the Next

(Note: This is the third hunk of a serialized story that I’m posting this week for reasons that will remain locked in the darkest chambers of my bosum for the time being.  For part one, look back here.  Part two appears here.  Now, buckle up and keep your hands and head inside the tram, it’s time for the next installment of:)

ADOLPHO’S BIG NIGHT:

II.  THE PROFESSIONALS

Adolpho had been bopping along to the beat, resting his eyes and savoring the physical sensation of a deep, strong bass line.  As he raised his glass to drain the final mouthful of lager, he stepped back for balance.  Swallowing, he lowered the glass.  “Buy you another?” The voice in his ear was honeyed.  The speaker was also honeyed, and tall and beautiful.  She had a slim and striking physique, high cheekbones and feline eyes, expensive blonde hair and perfect makeup.  Her tiny black dress looked more like a tattoo than clothing.  Adolpho checked to either side to see to whom she spoke.  There was no one else around. 

Returning his gaze to her, she smiled broadly.  “You mean me?” he asked. 

“Sure, it looks like you’re fresh out.  What are you drinking?”

“Whatever you like,” he replied.  “Beer, I guess.  Lager.” She flashed a wink that turned his knees to water, and turned on a stiletto heel toward the bar.  Adolpho leaned on a nearby table and watched her go to capture the bartender’s attention.  He was too stunned to smile, but glanced around to see whose table he’d crashed - to see, in fact, if anyone was there who had noticed his good fortune.

it was like this when I got here at 08:39 AM
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Monday, September 29, 2003

ADOLPHO’S BIG NIGHT: Chapter 2

(Note: This is the second piece of a serialized story that I’m posting this week while I concentrate on a few other matters with my writing time.  For part one, look back here.  Now, let’s hunker down for the thrills and excitement of:)

THE FAMILY

Adolpho had been bopping along to the beat, resting his eyes and savoring the physical sensation of a deep, strong bass line.  As he raised his glass to drain the final mouthful of lager, he stepped back for balance.  A hard elbow caught him in the kidney and he gasped, choking on the now-flat beer.  Eyes watering, he turned abruptly.  Before he could stop coughing and focus on whoever had struck him, a meaty hand on a massive arm thrust forward to seize hold of him, fingers wrapping around his throat, squeezing, nearly circling his neck.  Adolpho�s eyes continued to water and his tongue began to swell as he gaped at his attacker, and the three other men who were clearly with him.  They were grim-faced, all wearing tailored suits and silk neckties.  One was short, with an ugly scar at the corner of his mouth; one, of standard height and weight but with a robust build and dour sneer; one, who might charitably be called husky; and the one outsized gargantua who was nearly lifting Adolpho from the ground by his larynx.

it was like this when I got here at 08:41 AM
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Friday, September 26, 2003

The Spirit and the Flesh: Chuckles Looks Inward; Adolpho Steps Out

Good yontiff to you all.  Tonight begins one of my most intense periods of introspection and spirituality, the head of the year or Rosh Hashana - the first of ten days in which my forebears tell me I should clear my karma and get my head on straight.  I’m not too good at following such orders usually, but this particular holyday really works for me.  The hollow blast of shofars, the parables and prayers that salvage for me a sense of self-worth even in the midst of self-abnegation, the official permission to hit “restart” - I get a lot out of this process. 

Maybe I’ll hear something tonight or tomorrow that will be worth sharing with you all here; maybe not.  That’s not why I go.  However, I’d be sorely distracted if I thought I wasn’t keeping up with my posts during my renewal phase - I’m just that shallow.  What’s more, you all have given me a significant psychic boost in this past year, and I know you’ll be in my mind as I daven with the jewbu-s of Chochmat HaLev.  Y’all are stuck in my head, whether I like it or not.  I need to make accomodations for you if I hope to keep my focus where it belongs.

So here’s my proposal: Last year I wrote a story or five.  (Not sure which.) The way it’s set up, though, gives me posting material for today and all of next week.  So I’ll post the first portion here and now, and next week I’ll put up the rest, one chunk at a time.  It’s kind of long (even by my standards) so you might just burn out on it.  That’ll be fine.  I’m comfortable dumping too much here for you; it’s the failure to dump enough that would ride my mind.  So without further ado, I humbly present:

ADOLPHO’S BIG NIGHT

Adolpho stood with his back to the door while the others crowded around a cocktail table, leaning over it, focused on the effort of conversing over the throb of the house mix.  The unfinished brick walls of the club compressed the long room, enforcing conviviality among the many nighthawks stopping in for drinks.  Strangers were starting new friendships and friends forged new intimacies over finger food and tidy cocktails.  Adolpho and his party stood near the back, where a dj spun vinyl in front of the door of a huge safe from which the front face had been removed, replaced with glass that exposed the massive mechanisms inside.  The postindustrial tone was echoed by rippling plastic sheeting running the length of one wall and fiber-optic sputniks opposite it over the bar.  The light was low but not dim, the air was rich but not thick, and the sound was pervasive but not intrusive.

it was like this when I got here at 08:37 AM
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