nice. well, more than that, but that’s all i can muster at the moment. i trust you’ll know what i mean.

Posted by pea  on  09/15  at  10:44 AM

That was adorable. I had this huge smile on my face, sitting up here at the Reception Desk, the whole time I read your story. What a nice feeling in this commuter tale!

Posted by Randa  on  09/15  at  11:12 AM

She’s beautiful Dan!

Posted by Shannon  on  09/15  at  11:27 AM

oh man, that was beautiful!  goes to show you that there really are some genuine people in this world.  nicely captured.  and i love the line, “like a bowling ball through chilled maple syrup”—where do you think these things up?!  :)

Posted by P  on  09/15  at  12:01 PM

heh. you said “marginally”

twice.

Posted by sawni  on  09/15  at  12:21 PM

I love posts like this.  The ordinary is so not ordinary, when written well.

Posted by Almost Lucid (Brad)  on  09/15  at  02:57 PM

your love of people just shines, dan.  i love it.

Posted by stacey  on  09/16  at  01:21 PM

... and that’s how Mia & I became best friends.

no seriously, when you were describing the ass and crazy lady hair, I thought you were talking about me

Posted by  on  09/16  at  05:57 PM

what a great post.

Posted by anna  on  09/17  at  10:13 AM

One could almost say, from your description, that you came into contact with a commandeering ass… How would you like to be able to have that moniker? Hey man, I have a commandeering ass if I can, just by its mere presence, send you away from your seat just to accommodate my commandeering ass.

Posted by  on  09/21  at  06:58 AM
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