Monday, December 22, 2003

PuddleCracker

It was dark December, 6:30 on a cloudy wet night.  I was trudging from the main library to the Van Ness bus stops to get back home.  I came to the corner of Polk Street, surrounded by beaux arts facades, dramatically uplit and triumphantly decorated for the holidays, and found four small figures at the corner.  Four small female forms with dark hair, olive skin, sateen raincoats, rhinestone buckle pumps and tiny flouncy skirts.  One wore a backpack with Hello Kitty on it. 

They weren’t just girls, they were little girls.  No more than seven years old - maybe a five and two sixes?  And with them, their chaperone, a tiny woman, no taller than they were, perhaps in her thirties, with a woman’s face and a small child’s limbs, and dressed identically as her wards.  They were going to see the Nutcracker, just a block down Hayes at the Ballet House; I could already see the columns bedecked with golden lights in the form of toy soldiers. 

The four tiny figures all held hands at the corner in a chain, with the chaperone to one side.  The girls were whispering in an excited hush about “Nutcracker” this and “dancers” that, until one noticed a big puddle in the gutter in front of them.  “Puddle!,” she breathlessly informed her friends.  “Puddle,” they murmurred back to her with approval. 

The light changed and I stepped briskly out into the street. “Layani, DON’T!,” I heard the woman say sharply to one of her charges behind me.  “...puddle,” Layani replied dolefully.

that's just the way it seemed to me at 06:53 PM


Beautiful write in my opinion. Poignant with just a hint of inscrutable creepiness. The imagery of the small female figures in the dark, all dressed alike weirds me out a bit (but so do some Scooby-Doo episodes, so ya know ...).

I don’t understand it. However, I have always agreed with what William Hurt said in “The Big Chill“ - “Sometimes you have to let art...flow...over you.”

/bow

Posted by Brother Grimm  on  12/23  at  07:53 AM

You mean you didn’t lay your coat down over the puddle to let the little ones cross? Shame. Still, it’s a beautiful vignette.

Posted by Jules  on  12/23  at  10:35 AM

Oh that whole image is so clear...lovely.

Posted by Miss Bliss  on  12/23  at  11:27 AM

I think it’s criminal that she didn’t let the little girl jump in the puddle.

I figured out early on, that if I listened to my grandmother, I would have no stories to tell my children.

Posted by Gopi  on  12/23  at  12:47 PM
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