Monday, September 20, 2004

Vignette II: Gnop

Gnop: He’s there about half the time but I haven’t figured out a pattern to the appearances.  He’s always at the southeast corner of Fremont and Mission, right across from the terminal where my bus stops; I have to pass him on my way to the office.  This is a particularly raunchy corner, one where I’ve encountered some of the worst examples of homeless psychosis I’ve ever encountered, and I’ve encountered some doozies. 

The fellow I’m thinking of is tall and thin, white but deeply tanned.  His head is covered by a colorless knit cap from beneath which enormous fist-thick dreads slither, raffia-taupe and wily.  His face is square; it’s the shape I associate with frontiersmen, widebrowed and broadjawed.  Small square spectacles perch on his small pointed nose, under beetled brows that lend him an air of studious tension. 

A ratty plaid shirtcoat, untucked and unbuttoned, flaps loosely around his railthin frame.  His legs are basically naked, as his habitual cutoff shorts are almost indecently abbreviated.  The original trousers from which they’d been crafted must have had wide legs, and, as his are very skinny, the tiny shorts bell out uproariously at their lower fringe, just slightly below his hips.  His gnarled feet stand on old plastic shower sandals. 

Beside him is his bicycle, a road-weary touring model heavily laden with large, well-worn nylon totebags, neatly but very fully packed. The bike leans against a mural of designs created by schoolkids to encourage us to love the planet, in a display sponsored years ago by Enron to mask the blight of a gaping vacant lot.  The bright colors and ingenuous sentiment of the murals in front of which he stations himself, worn though they may be, belie the seedy gritty treeless waste of the corner where he stands, selling flowers. 

That’s what he does there: he sells flowers, by the stem or in bouquets, sometimes bound up with baby’s breath or in cellowrap.  He stands in his shabby coat and ludicrous shortlings, holding up a rose or a dahlia or an iris; he peers at it intently, grooming it, picking off bruised leaves and petals one at a time.  At his feet lies a welter of long slim white cardboard caskets full of homeless flowers, on offer today at fire sale prices.  They litter the filthy sidewalk with color.

that's just the way it seemed to me at 11:34 PM


I love how you can wax poetic about the sometimes less than perfect world about us. I have said it before and will again, please never stop with the writing. Maybe someday you could collect this site into a book of short stories. I can personally guarantee it would sell at least one copy but more than likely many more!

Posted by Jeff A  on  09/21  at  02:48 AM

"cardboard caskets full of homeless flowers at fire sale prices”....niiiiiiiiiice.

I’ve said this before but what always strikes me when you write about the homeless or the less than “abled” that you find in and around your city is that you see their human-ness, their struggle for dignity, their spirit.  That’s such a gift.

Posted by Miss Bliss  on  09/21  at  10:50 AM

I’m glad you liked it.  this one just seemed to write itself in a lot of ways.  He’s out there again this morning.  It’s getting colder.

Posted by dan  on  09/21  at  11:34 AM

wow.

Posted by Sawni  on  09/21  at  01:42 PM

and to think i’ve worked in the building across the street from him and his flowers and the Enron sponsered mural for the last six years, and yet i’ve never seen him.  tomorrow i’m going to sit out there until i see him and get a chance to buy one of his flowers.

good to see you today—i’m looking forward to seeing your terminal pictures!

Posted by P  on  09/23  at  01:28 AM
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